Sunday, February 3, 2013

A Big Mistake - Chapter 1

Hii ;p i started the new third story! I hope you enjoy it's a real story unlike the previous two stories i wrote.

Btw this story might be much much longer than the others ..
Spam me with feedbacks !;p

Enjoy x
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Main Character:

Rawan: 12 year old girl. She has a kind of tanned skin, light brown eyes, brown hair that reaches her shoulders, she's tall and chubby.



I am the eldest and the only girl in my family, i have two smaller brothers. I live with my family in a small apartement 3la gadna ;p

My smaller and the middle brother is Khaled. He's 11 years old, he's a troublemaker; we can't go a day without fighting, but still i know from inside that he's a good person and fun to be with x

My smallest brother is A7mad. He's 8 years old, he has a big head to that reason i call him 'Bu 9makh' bas i don't allow anybody else calls him that except me! I love him more than Khaled, A7mad is cute, hilarious, and edible ;p!

It was New year 2012, i was in our yakhour in chabd...


Sara: "Rawan tyen yakhourna?"

My cousin sara is 2 years younger than me, but her mind is 2 years older than me. She's not so thin, normal height, sparkling brown eyes with thick eye lashes, and has a short light brown hair. Sara loves english songs the most and she adore something called Mutref Almutref!

Rawan: "Madri as2al obouy wait"

Sara's father is my father's cousin, my dad's side they are all married from their families ya3ni m7ad '3areb ;p

I went to my dad and asked him if i can go, Sara's yakhour is next to ours ya3ni 6ofa b 6ofa we go by walking.

Rawan: "Baba 3adi arou7 wya sara yakhour baba 3li?" Baba 3li is Sara's grandfather and my dad's uncle
Dad: "Shtsawen trou7en"
Rawan: "Please barou7 bsha8loun chara8yat b3d shwy 7g new year"
Dad: "Ybaynoun 3ndi shoufehum mni"
Rawan: "Baba pleeasse!!" i begged him
Dad: "La elaha ela allah 3laich rou7ay rou7ay bas mu t6awlen"
Rawan: "OK!"

I went back to Sara and headed to baba 3li's yakhour, by no time we arrived...

Sara: "Salam"
All: "3laikum el salam"

I went on to every single person and said hi except the boys ya3ni ;;p

3ami Fu2ad (Sara's dad): "Ha Rawon shlounich"
Rawan: "Tmam" i smiled
3ami Basam: "Rawano!!"

3ami Basam was the best, i haven't seen him for more than 2 years all because of him studying in USA.
I went running to him and hugged him; i really missed him

3ami Basam: "Shlounich yal nz'3a!"
Rawan: "Tmam enta shlounik!"
3ami Basam: "Ana zain 7mdellah"
Rawan: "I missed you!" i gave him another hug
3ami Basam: "Ana akthar 7bebtii" he hugged me back

3ami Basam is 25 years old, he's tall/tanned, perfect body, and i always tell sara if he was younger i would definetly date him!;p


We sat and chatted about mostly everything till it was about 11:50pm...

M7md: "Yallah ta3alaw!" he screamed from outside

M7md is also sara's cousin, he's 19 years old, curly brown hair, sparkling black greenish eyes, and he likes people calling him 7amood more than m7md...

They all gathered outside while i sat on the chairs staring at them, i don't know them very well so 7sait nafsi ga6a wayhii -.-


Sara: "Shfech ga3da brou7ich emshay"
Rawan: "La 3adi"
Sara: "Kaifech"

Sara changes her attitude with me when she's with her family, 7mdellah 3ndi 3ami Basam i chill with if she's not around

I sat tweeting from my iPhone, i felt someone sit next to me, but i didn't bother to look who it was...

.....: "Shlounich?" it was Meshari, 7amood's smaller brother

Meshari is 15 years old, he's tall/tanned, short spiky brown hair, sparkling brown eyes, and has a perfect body.

Rawan: "Tmam"
Meshari: "3sa doum" he was staring at me
Rawan: "Mashkour" i smiled

There was some awkward silent moments...

Meshari: "9ayra 7lwa Rawano"


Well sh8a9dik Mr. Meshari?


I wanted to vomit infront of him cause wai3! Seriously i'm chubby, i'm ugly, and nobody likes me! When did i become 7lwa ;s

I stared at him...

Meshari: "Shfech" he asked
Rawan: "Shayef shakli"
Meshari: "Shfeh shaklich"
Rawan: "La wallah? Meshari please mra thanya etha btjamel la tjamel chethi ok" i got really pissed of cause i hate the fact people saying i'm beautiful while i'm not!

I told sara that i wanted to go back to our yakour...

Sara: "Laish!"
Rawan: "Bas ta3bana"
Sara: "Ok kaifech"

I went out to our yakhour and saw them all sitting in the living room chatting...


3ameti 7e9a: "Hala rawan wain kentay"
Rawan: "Yakhour baba 3li"

I took a bottle of water and went to sit on the grass outside. The weather was literally amazing, i plugged on my earphones and put my favorite arabic singer, Abdullah Rwaished. I mean like seriously mnu ma y7b Rwaished ;o<3!!!


I saw Noor, my 1 year younger than me cousin come towards me.

Noor: "Gwa"
Rawan: "Ygawech"
Noor: "Shfech lma dshaitay mu 3la ba3thich"
Rawan: "Meshari el zft"
Noor: "Shsawa b3d"
Rawan: "7ywan ma y3arf yjamel ygouli 9ayra 7lwa, bthemtich ana 7lwa?" i asked
Noor: "Taben el 9j wallah rawano enty wayhich wallah 7lu bas yabelich t'th3fen"
Rawa: "I can't!!" i was about to cry


Yakhiii ely y7ib el akel shesawiiii ;'(!!!!!


Noor: "You have to try Rawan wallah it's for your own sake"
Rawan: "Enshallah i will" i faked smile
Noor: "3yal wain sara?"
Rawan: .....
Noor: "Aha ignore her rawan hathi swalefha"
Rawan: "I am, thank you noor enty el w7eda ely tfhmeni" i hugged her
Noor: "Wlw 7bebtii"

"BOOM .. BOOM .. BOOM" we heard and saw the fireworks from baba 3li's yakhour

Rawan: "IT'S 2012 !!!!!!!" i screamed

I quickly unlocked my phone and tweeted ' HAPPY NEW YEAR TWEEPS! *dancing* '

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